Examples
i figured i would throw in a couple of small sections from the story to see how y'all like it. be honest if you don't like it.
"Alright little Missy hand over your gold and i won't be forced to hurt you." The theif said, exposing his club. "You couldn't hurt me if you tried, and especially not with that." I responded, swiftly unwrapping my blade. "Oh, wow fancy. Question is can you use it?" He chuckled. "Do you want to find out?" I growled. He began laughing and I immediately charged. He had no time to react. The blade entered his chest with nearly no friction. He was now gasping for air, my blade glistening a crimson red, covered with his blood.
Hrothgar led me back to the forge. He set about searching, practically tearing the small area. I stood back and watched patiently. "Where did i put it?!?" He mumbled to himself. Finally he gave up his frantic search, turned to me, looked me in the eye, and said, "You need to leave. Go as far as possible. Do not hesitate. I have a friend in the next town that will help you. I just need you to do one thing for me." I could sense his distress. "Depends, what is it?" I responded casually. "I need you to kill Orik's mother."
"Okay, we'll take your gold and hm... the little lady will have to come as well." One of them said in a raspy voice. I could see both Laveidem and Hrothgar tense. "You will do no such thing." Hrothgar replied. "This ''little lady''
is probably the fiercest fighter out of the three of us, considering she has a purpose to fight for." Laveidem added.
